I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~

[Unlucky]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Dalal Khalid

(Decision): The word it’s all about.
Today I will tell you my story with it; I’ve always wanted to leave my foot prints on the sand of time, So you’ll know there’s something that I left behind.
When I leave this world I’ll leave with no regrets, I’ll be something to remember so you won’t forget, that I was here, that I did ,I’ve done everything that I wanted I’ll leave my mark in this world.
All of these wishes are nothing without making a decision ,this is how I’ll make a difference , I’ll do everything that I want ,I’ll make it more than I thought it will be ,sometimes I feel lazy ,bored, feels like I don’t want to do anything ,I cried , I screamed in other times .
But I keep on remembering these words
Which were told by a dear friend:
(Don’t I deserve such an honor? I want to walk the path of excellence)
And I keep on replying I deserve it, I can do it, and I will do it –inshallah-
Keep your faith in Allah, have the courage to take the most important decision which is believing in yourself.
Finally my last wish is: that one day I’ll let you know that I gave my all ,did my best ,brought someone to happiness
I’ll leave this world little better just because I was here
And in your own way I hope you will do it
May god bless you all for listening.
(Maybe 7 months ago I loved saying these words)

Brilliant , i loved this one.writing like a dreamer

looking forward to your next work

[Dalal Khalid]

To my teachers:
This words is for those who inspire us today, who always lend a helping hand to help show us the way, this words is for those who see their students through the tough times in their lives for that, we say thank you
You have made a difference, you have shaped our minds
You have changed the world, one child at a time
You have always been there in everything you do
I hope that you're as proud of me as I am proud of you
This words is for those who heard the silent cries,
Who stepped in to wipe the tears from the children's eyes, for those who gave us a safe place to grow a place that we can call our home.
As I look back on my life, into the path within my reach
I hope I can change a life of those that I teach
I can make a difference all I do is try, Try to see a different world, through our eyes
Thank you

The English club leader: Dalal Khalid
Under the supervision of: Miss.sadyah al-ghamdi.
(that wasn't completly honest but i wrote to the teacher on "the freedom writers movie" )

[Unlucky]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Dalal Khalid

To my teachers:
This words is for those who inspire us today, who always lend a helping hand to help show us the way, this words is for those who see their students through the tough times in their lives for that, we say thank you
You have made a difference, you have shaped our minds
You have changed the world, one child at a time
You have always been there in everything you do
I hope that you're as proud of me as I am proud of you
This words is for those who heard the silent cries,
Who stepped in to wipe the tears from the children's eyes, for those who gave us a safe place to grow a place that we can call our home.
As I look back on my life, into the path within my reach
I hope I can change a life of those that I teach
I can make a difference all I do is try, Try to see a different world, through our eyes
Thank you

The English club leader: Dalal Khalid
Under the supervision of: Miss.sadyah al-ghamdi.
(that wasn't completly honest but i wrote to the teacher on "the freedom writers movie" )

really nice and its so smart that you found something to inspire you ,a movie, something to give a small push so you can grab your pen and express your feelings on papers

proud of you

[Dalal Khalid]

In a several points in my life, I didn't realize how blessed person I am looking back I wonder, why do we have to lose things, and then a appreciate it -Dalal Khalid.

[Dalal Khalid]

It was hard to hold back all of that pain, Hearing it many times how beautiful I am


But it didn't matter Beauty makes no one happy, those heart I've loved weregone for so long. In every morning when I lay down every night shocking with mytears, Who said I am not lonely only because there's many people around me. Whatdoes it mean when you lose the meaning of life? You are almost ashamed ofyourself. You don't understand how did you let things get this far! But youcan't change it now, It's too late, you better keep screaming in silence don'ttalk you are not worthy for anyone's worry.

[Dalal Khalid]

She was crying so hard, She was lost
all what she ever wanted was love and attention
She deserved them but ... she didn't get them.
She never got them.
She's not sure what to do, She's pushing everybody away
They are using her, She is just giving but never getting
She can't deal with the pain, her mind is fading away
Her Heart was shatterd with neglecting arrow
No one will care that she can't breath no one will notice that she doesn't eat
No one will see the pain and the tears
'Cause all what they see is a fake smile forming what she want to be ... (Happy).

[Unlucky]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Dalal Khalid

It was hard to hold back all of that pain, Hearing it many times how beautiful I am


But it didn't matter Beauty makes no one happy, those heart I've loved weregone for so long. In every morning when I lay down every night shocking with mytears, Who said I am not lonely only because there's many people around me. Whatdoes it mean when you lose the meaning of life? You are almost ashamed ofyourself. You don't understand how did you let things get this far! But youcan't change it now, It's too late, you better keep screaming in silence don'ttalk you are not worthy for anyone's worry.

you're describing someone's misery in this paragraph (I hope its not you), its really nice and moving

[Unlucky]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Dalal Khalid

She was crying so hard, She was lost
all what she ever wanted was love and attention
She deserved them but ... she didn't get them.
She never got them.
She's not sure what to do, She's pushing everybody away
They are using her, She is just giving but never getting
She can't deal with the pain, her mind is fading away
Her Heart was shatterd with neglecting arrow
No one will care that she can't breath no one will notice that she doesn't eat
No one will see the pain and the tears
'Cause all what they see is a fake smile forming what she want to be ... (Happy).

Same as above piece ,you are using a fictitious character to describe someone's bad
feelings ... nice writing


? why all your writings are kinda sad and dramatic
?are you ok

[Dalal Khalid]

Yeah, Sure .. I am okay
Thank you

[Dalal Khalid]

What is the feeling taking over? Thinking no one could open this door!
I used to stand so long I used to be strong, unbreakable … Like nothing could go wrong, and Dreaming of what could be And If I’d end up happy. Trying hard to reach out to you, But it felt like no one could hear me every time I tried to speak out. But I’ll learn how to fly, I’ll do what it takes to breakaway, I will make a change and I will be brave.
I will walk through those opened doors, those buildings with a thousand floors, Maybe I don’t know where or when but I got to keep moving on so I could fly away ~