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At the beginning I want to thank you all for giving me this opportunity again to represent my school in this competition.
Four months ago my mother had a surgery on her legs, one day after the surgery she was in pain. Therefore, I went with her to the emergency room;
We have waited for an hour because there were a lot of patients, and when we finally see the doctor he was able to speak Arabic but the nurses weren't, I was in a difficult situation. That because I had to be strong for my mother and try to let her calm down, and I had to speak English with the nurses and understand what they are saying and translate it for my mother, in that moment I realize that there is a lot of medical terms that I don't know, but I had to deal with it which, I did in a surprising way.

When we finally finish with the doctor I went with the nurse to bring a wheelchair for my mother, and I told her that I want to work here to help people but it's so tough to work in such environment, she replied "work hard and one day you'll be part of it".
I went out of the emergency room that day with knowing what exactly I want to be for my whole life. I see that events keep telling me to follow my vision so I'll.
Moreover, what I found amazing is that even though all the medical crew was busy a lot but that didn't stop them to be nice and helpful then I knew that I want to be one of them and If I couldn't then I will teach medical student to be like them.

in addition, I want to say all I know is I won't stop dreaming therefore I'm telling you don't be afraid to dream And I'm telling all the people who kept telling me I can't do anything but look at me now ,just being brave enough to stand again here on this stage and being afraid from nothing .

In conclusion, I want to thank my parents for supporting me I want to thank my country my teacher my friends my sister and I promise that I'll push myself over the limits and make you all proud of me .

God bless you all for listening and paying attention.

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Nice topice
by the way my lovely friend

I've written
not wrote
have +has+had =V3

thax I will be back

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:27:im with a friend on the phone, will give you my feedback right when im finished

thanks for posting

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“I want to be a princess” said the 8 years old girl on the white dress. The little girl was defiantly a dreamer. She couldn’t understand the fact that she can’t be a princess when her mother told her so, Dalal, the young girl felt sadness and maybe a little bit of madness. “Why can’t I be a princess if that was what I want?” thought Dalal.
She looked on the mirror she was able to see a curly hair with a tanned skin color, her Arabian roots was shown. She thought “maybe it’s because I don’t have a white skin color like snow-white or a blonde hair like Cinderella”. Dalal wasn’t that normal little girl, she used to ask too much about everything and she used to think too much that she almost missed her childhood, but even though she calculated facts and moves about everything around her, Dalal was mad that she couldn’t expect and know for sure the future and the unknown was getting her frustrated.
Dalal turned around to find her mother looking out on the window, she ran over to her lap. Sat down and asked her “mum, am I beautiful?” Her mother laughed, hugged her and told her “yes Dalal you are” with a tender smile drown on her face. “But I am not blonde like Cinderella or white skinned like snow white” said the girl with shaking lips. Her mom looked straight at her eyes and said “beauty is what your eyes believe it is. The eyes tell the truth that your heart feel” “I don’t understand mom” said Dalal. “It means that you’re beautiful to me because my eyes know the truth of your heart and I love you.it doesn’t matter if you were black or white, tall or short, because no matter what… I will always love you, you are my very beautiful daughter” Dalal smiled and went to play with her doll, she knew she looked nothing like that beautiful doll but she also knew that her mother loved her more than anything in the whole wide world and that was more than enough in that moment, because it was all what she wanted.

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i really liked the speech because it was a real story, sorry for your mom by the way

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i think there are some grammatical mistakes, but not that much, i want to asses the writing not the grammar.

The essay was very nice, but it lacks the professional touch, it seems like you wrote it when you were in high school !! right

if this is the best you can do then i think you should work more on your self before you start writing professionally


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wow, as i said before, there are some grammatical mistakes but im only assessing your writing

i really liked this one, you were writing from the heart just like a professional writer and you reached to the audience with your pasionate words and relativly short clear sentences

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[]i really liked the speech because it was a real story, sorry for your mom by the way
Thank you, She's fine now thanks to god
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i think there are some grammatical mistakes, but not that much, i want to asses the writing not the grammar.
Yes i realize that but as i said I've wrote it 3 years ago :)
The essay was very nice, but it lacks the professional touch, it seems like you wrote it when you were in high school !! right
Yes i was in high school
if this is the best you can do then i think you should work more on your self before you start writing professionally

sure Insha'Allah but I wish you've read the rest too
thanks for stepping by <3
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