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2012- 10- 10 | #11 |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: I've wrote and you're reading it <3 ~
]wow, as i said before, there are some grammatical mistakes but im only assessing your writing
i really liked this one, you were writing from the heart just like a professional writer and you reached to the audience with your pasionate words and relativly short clear sentences Well I do what i can but I am not perfect :$ that was the most honest opinion i got so far Thank you <3 |
2012- 10- 10 | #12 |
أكـاديـمـي مـشـارك
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
Really Great
I'm waiting the whole book but now I will read all what you wrote I read the first part thank you dalal you are such a good writer |
2012- 10- 10 | #13 | |
أكـاديـمـي ذهـبـي
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
اقتباس:
this piece of writing is so good, it could be a good bed time story for kids, if you can keep writing with the same style, i believe you can make fairy tales for kids and obviously you are so good at this im honest, don't be upset with me |
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2012- 10- 10 | #14 |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
[]Really Great
I'm waiting the whole book but now I will read all what you wrote I read the first part thank you dalal you are such a good writer[ Thank you, I don't think I will post so many of it but I'll do my best to share <3 |
2012- 10- 10 | #15 |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
[]this piece of writing is so good, it could be a good bed time story for kids,
if you can keep writing with the same style, i believe you can make fairy tales for kids and obviously you are so good at this im honest, don't be upset with me I am not upset at all you just didn't get the point it was just a hint that this child had some thoughts about herself which will help as the story goes on in makeing the thought of the girl who is trying to realize her inside and outside grows up in a very complicated way 'cause she used to think ....diffrently idk ..did you get it ? |
2012- 10- 10 | #16 | |
أكـاديـمـي ذهـبـي
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
اقتباس:
yes yes, i understand what you mean..... the begging sounds like a fairy tale to me, but if you think you can develop the story to describe Dalals in her adolescence and mature age,then i think the story could grow into something great |
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2012- 10- 10 | #17 |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
Insha'Allah I will <3 ~
Thank you |
2012- 10- 10 | #18 |
أكـاديـمـي ذهـبـي
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
you are very welcome, and i hope that you will continue writing and maybe publish a book someday
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2012- 10- 10 | #19 |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
I whish I could show it to someone like a teacher or doctor
i can't publish it here for sure and I am not sure that i should keep writing it any way thank you very much <3 and step by as much as you can read everything and comment if you liked to do so |
2012- 10- 10 | #20 |
أكـاديـمـي ذهـبـي
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
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i guess you should, you can send your writings to your English instructor, or maybe show it to a native speaker and ask him for an honest opinion , i really wish you would keep writing, because you seem to love it and you are really good don't quit please, i will help you with anything i hate to see people with big goals unsupported |
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