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Being a broke




Sad At night
Great in the morning
Huge ambition ,with some depression
Play in the Garden ,lie on the Grass
Looking at the sky, Counting the starts
Calling mammy needs some help
Take My Body its your help
I'm a broke But Standing by
Being upset before that night
Going To bed without some wings
My Thoughts feel lonely in my mind
I need to make them having a wife
Being a broke something easy
Being without a wife driving me crazy
A man without a wife
Like a computer without online

Having a wife will make me broke
Even though . I still broke
written By Nail Al -enzy

[Serious Smile]

Even i don't know anything about English poetry

But the meaning is great ..

Keep up and continue writing

[عطرالحروف]

Wonderful poem END stunning Nile

[عطرالحروف]

A true forgot tell accept traffic Bntdhar Jdidkalmtweida

[Against Gravity]

Huge ambition ,with some depression

aren’t we all
??

amazing poem

i loved the beginning
but i didnt like the end
when you said that your thoughts feel lonely

thoughts dont feel?

maybe if you said
my thoughts being lonely
or being lonely with my thoughts
or i was alone with my thoughts trapped in my mind
seeking help
or make this line ( Calling mammy needs some help
after that

sending my dreams , go fly blind


anything rhymes with kind lol
see this site its useful if you want to make your poems rhyme

http://www.wordhippo.com/


one more thing , i dont know but i dont think its ok for an adult to say mammy im just saying

BTW where did you get that from? i mean american say mom and mommy and British say mum and mummy.
but mammy never heard of it
..
rate+ like
keep it goin and keep it comin

[Serious Smile]

wow

you amazed me Ghada .. you have brief knowledge about poetries and how to make it or create it.

Do I need it in my major or it's just a hobby for u guys ?

wish to have great info form u about it

wish all the best

[Against Gravity]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Serious Smile

wow

you amazed me Ghada .. you have brief knowledge about poetries and how to make it or create it.

Do I need it in my major or it's just a hobby for u guys ?

wish to have great info form u about it

wish all the best

thank you so much
no i just love english and everything about it and I have a passion for poetry

i dont know about "poetry" if we have to study it?or not
but i think it's nice to learn it .

our bachelor degree is english language not english literature, so i guess we will not concentrate on poetry too much

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Great

[wintr song]

[غرآم]

Wonderful��

Thank you ��