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Being a broke Sad At night Great in the morning Huge ambition ,with some depression Play in the Garden ,lie on the Grass Looking at the sky, Counting the starts Calling mammy needs some help Take My Body its your help I'm a broke But Standing by Being upset before that night Going To bed without some wings My Thoughts feel lonely in my mind I need to make them having a wife Being a broke something easy Being without a wife driving me crazy A man without a wife Like a computer without online Having a wife will make me broke Even though . I still broke written By Nail Al -enzy :16::16::16::16::16: :16::16::16::16: :16::16::16: :16::16: :1: |
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Even i don't know anything about English poetry
But the meaning is great .. Keep up and continue writing :16: |
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:44: aren’t we all ?? amazing poem i loved the beginning but i didnt like the end when you said that your thoughts feel lonely thoughts dont feel? maybe if you said my thoughts being lonely or being lonely with my thoughts or i was alone with my thoughts trapped in my mind seeking help or make this line ( Calling mammy needs some help after that sending my dreams , go fly blind :41: anything rhymes with kind lol see this site its useful if you want to make your poems rhyme http://www.wordhippo.com/ one more thing , i dont know but i dont think its ok for an adult to say mammy im just saying :mh318: BTW where did you get that from? i mean american say mom and mommy and British say mum and mummy. but mammy never heard of it .. rate+ like:27::2: keep it goin and keep it comin |
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wow you amazed me Ghada .. you have brief knowledge about poetries and how to make it or create it. Do I need it in my major or it's just a hobby for u guys ? wish to have great info form u about it wish all the best :16: |
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thank you so much :29: no i just love english and everything about it and I have a passion for poetry i dont know about "poetry" if we have to study it?or not but i think it's nice to learn it . our bachelor degree is english language not english literature, so i guess we will not concentrate on poetry too much |
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Great
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