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هيوفه دلع 2013- 1- 9 09:58 AM

English learner Hey let's practice it !
 
Good day everyone

let's practice it during the holiday
improve your language and gain information

let us share our thoughts and discuss English terms
away of the academic atmosphere

feel free and participate with me

lets start the first exercise

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Can you find the mistakes in these sentences?


"I had already talking to her before she called you."
"This wall was build by my grandfather."
"Are you tired? Do you want to make a break?"
"I wish I would had remembered her birthday."
Who's pen is this? Can I borrow it? I want to write a letter."


wish you good luck

lio45 2013- 1- 9 10:55 AM

رد: English learner Hey let's practice it !
 
"I had already talking to her before she called you."
talked

"This wall was build by my grandfather."
built

"Are you tired? Do you want to make a break?"
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"I wish I would had remembered her birthday."
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Who's pen is this? Can I borrow it? I want to write a letter."
:40: ماعرفت


mǾҺÄmmĔđ 2013- 1- 9 10:56 AM

رد: English learner Hey let's practice it !
 
There are many mistakes in that paragraph
First one I had already talking to her before she called you
correction is I had already talked to her before she called you past perfect
tense
the second mistake is This wall was build by my grandfather
correct is This wall was built by my grandfather because passive sentence
Are you tired? Do you want to make a break third one is
Are you tired? Do you want to take a break
Who's pen is this? Can I borrow it? I want to write a letter fifth is
Whose pen is this? Can I borrow it? I want to write a letter
I have not seen any mistake in the fourth statement

حديث شيءٍ ما 2013- 1- 9 10:56 AM

رد: English learner Hey let's practice it !
 
Good day leady,

thanks for this topic

I'll do my best to find the mistakes:


1- I had already talked to her befor she called you
2- This wall was built by my grandfather
3- >>>>
4- I wish I could had remembered her birthday
5- Whose pen is this? May I borrow it? I want to write a letter



for number three I cant find any mistake


I"m not so good in English, but I'm trying to improve it


thanks again


best regards

منتسب هنا 2013- 1- 9 11:04 AM

رد: English learner Hey let's practice it !
 
nice lesson

another question please:19:

هيوفه دلع 2013- 1- 9 11:48 AM

رد: English learner Hey let's practice it !
 
well done !!

waiting for others

هيوفه دلع 2013- 1- 9 01:46 PM

رد: English learner Hey let's practice it !
 


here is the answers

1. Talking should be talked to make the sentence the past perfect, which is the correct structure.
2. This sentence should be a passive and so build should be built.
3. We don't say make a break; the correct collocation is take a break.
4. In this sentence the word would is not needed.
5. Who's means who is and so it is wrong. We use whose before a noun i.e whose pen.


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will be back next Saturday
Allah willing

wish you a nice weekend

Ahmadd 2013- 1- 9 01:56 PM

رد: English learner Hey let's practice it !
 
First of all thank you for this topic
what the wrong with this "I wish I would had remembered her birthday"

I wish I had remembered her birthday
Is that Correct?

Thx :13:

Infatuation 2013- 1- 9 02:55 PM

رد: English learner Hey let's practice it !
 

wonderful topic, but unfortunately I just noticed the topic know even though I was excited to answer, but that doesn't matter know.

I will wait for the other questions next saturday.

Khawloula 2013- 1- 9 03:07 PM

رد: English learner Hey let's practice it !
 
Good topic, it should keep members busy doing something useful during their free time. It's a good practice for begginers too : ) :21:


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