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English Literature 2011- 9- 22 11:52 AM

I have a little lovely book
 
Hi every body, I am going to write stories from small book, I believe its will help us to know how to read stories, plus to add so many words in our dictionary



:mh12: first time for me to write something like this


Pleas correct my mistakes( grammar & spilling ) any time really I went to learn:(204):

Suggested

I hope to be canceled classification level of the first and fifth level, etc.

ـألسآحر 2011- 9- 22 12:15 PM

رد: I have a little lovely book
 
go ahead

~Mrs.ENGLI$H~ 2011- 9- 22 12:21 PM

رد: I have a little lovely book
 
اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة آداب انكليزي (المشاركة 4467567)
Hi every body, I am going to write stories from a small book, I believe it (without s) will help us to know how to read stories, plus to add so many words to our dictionary



:mh12: first time for me to write something like this


Pleas correct my mistakes( grammar & spilling ) any time really I want to learn:(204):

Suggested
what is the function of this word here? I mean suggested:(107):
I hope to cancelthe classification of levels of the first and fifth level, etc.



or you can say cancel the levels classifications

and no need to mintion the First & Fifth

I hope I helped

البريئة2 2011- 9- 22 01:19 PM

رد: I have a little lovely book
 
good idea
i have one notice
im not sure
but in your title you said little and book
singular one book

is that right ?

P e a c e 2011- 9- 22 01:53 PM

رد: I have a little lovely book
 
اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة آداب انكليزي;4467567
Hi every body , everybody - one word,

Suggested - suggestion would be better


اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انقلش (المشاركة 4467691)
no need to mention the First & Fifth



Thank you all, we'll learn form each other.

Where is the story?

~Mrs.ENGLI$H~ 2011- 9- 22 02:07 PM

رد: I have a little lovely book
 
اقتباس:

suggestion would be better


not better... it is the right word we can't use the verb of it here

suggested confused me totally
:106:

gєℓηαя 2011- 9- 22 02:17 PM

رد: I have a little lovely book
 
It's a creative and new to congratulate you all on what its like to work and we are always next to you

English Literature 2011- 9- 22 03:11 PM

رد: I have a little lovely book
 
:d5::d5:Think you very very match>> pls keep on >>

Pleas correct my mistakes( grammar & spilling ) any time really I :(204)::(204):want to learn



Now the fist story



(1)

Ail ,who was working a long way from home ,wanted to send a letter to his wife ,but he could neither read nor write .and he had to work all day , so he could only look for somebody to write his letter late at night .At last he found the house of a letter-writer whose name was Nasreddin .
Nasreddin was already in bed .it late , he said what do you want? I want you to write a letter to my wife ,said ail . nasreddin was not pleased. He thought for a few seconds and then said, has the letter got to go far ? what dose that matter ?answered Ali. Well, my writing is so strange that only I can read it , and if I have to travel a long way to read your letter to your wife , it will cost you a lot of money .Ail went away quickly.

?What was Ail doing
?Where was he
?What did he want to do
? What was nasreddin doing


SO LONG:53:

I am now going to play football >>>>>>
:(107):or
I am going now to play football



~Mrs.ENGLI$H~ 2011- 9- 22 04:26 PM

رد: I have a little lovely book
 
Think you very very match>> pls keep on >>

Thank not think


Pleas correct my mistakes( grammar & spilling ) any time really I want to learn

please


Now the fist story

first

(1)

Ail ,who was working a long way from home ,wanted to send a letter to his wife
,but he could neither read nor write .


better to say un educated;un lettered;illiterate

and he had to work all day , so he could only look for somebody to write his letter. late at night ,at last he found the house of a letter-writer whose name was Nasreddin .

no need to use and here just start a new sentence




better to say[COLOR="rgb(65, 105, 225)"] the letter--writer's house . he owns the house not the house owns the writer
[/COLOR]


.Nasreddin was already in bed .It was late , he said what do you want?



when you narrate in English they usually , they usually Quote the speech of the character then they refer to the him or her like following:

what do you want '', he said ''



I want you to write a letter to my wife ,said Ail .Nasreddin was not pleased.


He thought for a few seconds and then said, has the letter got to go far ?


seconds are plural we can not use the singular A here

also do not forget the


quotation marks





what dose that matter ?answered Ali.




again ,,,quotations



Well, my writing is so strange that only I can read it , and if I have to travel a long way to read your letter to your wife , it will cost you a lot of money .

quotation marks again


Ail went away quickly

?What was Ail doing
?Where was he
?What did he want to do
? What was nasreddin doing


SO LONG

I am now going to play football >>>>>>
or
I am going now to play football


all right

~Mrs.ENGLI$H~ 2011- 9- 22 04:32 PM

رد: I have a little lovely book
 
It is really tiring writing and correcting in English

I hope I coverd all the mistakes & not doing others:biggrin:


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