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ÈÓã Çááå ÇáÑÍãä ÇáÑÍíãó I'm going to post the most random things here .. that I've wrote Feel free to comment but please do it on another color ..No black <3 This will be the first It's a speech that I've wrote it almost 3 years ,It was my 2 attemp on the same speech competition I made it to the semi- finals but that was all, Hope you like it <3 At the beginning I want to thank you all for giving me this opportunity again to represent my school in this competition. Four months ago my mother had a surgery on her legs, one day after the surgery she was in pain. Therefore, I went with her to the emergency room; We have waited for an hour because there were a lot of patients, and when we finally see the doctor he was able to speak Arabic but the nurses weren't, I was in a difficult situation. That because I had to be strong for my mother and try to let her calm down, and I had to speak English with the nurses and understand what they are saying and translate it for my mother, in that moment I realize that there is a lot of medical terms that I don't know, but I had to deal with it which, I did in a surprising way. When we finally finish with the doctor I went with the nurse to bring a wheelchair for my mother, and I told her that I want to work here to help people but it's so tough to work in such environment, she replied "work hard and one day you'll be part of it". I went out of the emergency room that day with knowing what exactly I want to be for my whole life. I see that events keep telling me to follow my vision so I'll. Moreover, what I found amazing is that even though all the medical crew was busy a lot but that didn't stop them to be nice and helpful then I knew that I want to be one of them and If I couldn't then I will teach medical student to be like them. in addition, I want to say all I know is I won't stop dreaming therefore I'm telling you don't be afraid to dream And I'm telling all the people who kept telling me I can't do anything but look at me now ,just being brave enough to stand again here on this stage and being afraid from nothing . In conclusion, I want to thank my parents for supporting me I want to thank my country my teacher my friends my sister and I promise that I'll push myself over the limits and make you all proud of me . God bless you all for listening and paying attention. :16: |
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This was my prom speech too <3 My Memory I always knew this day would come, we’d be standing here with our future in our handsSo many dreams so many plans. Always knew after all these years, there’d be laughter there’d be tears But never thought that I’d walk away, with so much joy but so much pain And I know that is so hard to say goodbye But yesterday’s gone I gotta keep moving on and I’m so thankful for the moments so glad I got to know you all! I’ll always remember you Another chapter in the book, you can’t go back but you can look Who knows what we’re heading towards? I wish you love, I wish you luck, for you the world just opens up, So Smile and keep Your Hopes Up . One day we’ll look back and we’ll smile, we’ll laugh but right now we just cry because it’s so hard for us to say goodbye. So here we are now everything is about to change we face tomorrow as we say goodbye to yesterday. This is a chapter ending but the stories only just begun, a page is turning for everyone So I'm moving on, letting go and I’m holding on to tomorrow I'll always got the memories while I'm finding out who I'm gonna be . I’m so excited I can barely even catch my breath! This happy ending is the start of all our dreams. Now I want you to listen and to remember these words, it’s time to show the world we've got something to say out loud that will never fade away I know I'll miss you all but we'll meet again someday ‘Cause we are the future we’ll never fade away. And just so you know, you’ll be with me wherever I go Everything change but beauty remain <3~ so let’s Make these dreams True ~ P.S. I will post so many random things that have only one common thing which is the author "Dalal Khalid" I hope you like it >< |
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by the way my lovely friend I've written not wrote have +has+had =V3 thax I will be back |
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Actully it's wrote only a missing *it* too bad that was all what've noticed Yes, please come back soon why not :) |
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:27:im with a friend on the phone, will give you my feedback right when im finished
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Thank you .. The pleasure is all mine Feel free to say what ever you like ~ |
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“I want to be a princess” said the 8 years old girl on the white dress. The little girl was defiantly a dreamer. She couldn’t understand the fact that she can’t be a princess when her mother told her so, Dalal, the young girl felt sadness and maybe a little bit of madness. “Why can’t I be a princess if that was what I want?” thought Dalal.
She looked on the mirror she was able to see a curly hair with a tanned skin color, her Arabian roots was shown. She thought “maybe it’s because I don’t have a white skin color like snow-white or a blonde hair like Cinderella”. Dalal wasn’t that normal little girl, she used to ask too much about everything and she used to think too much that she almost missed her childhood, but even though she calculated facts and moves about everything around her, Dalal was mad that she couldn’t expect and know for sure the future and the unknown was getting her frustrated. Dalal turned around to find her mother looking out on the window, she ran over to her lap. Sat down and asked her “mum, am I beautiful?” Her mother laughed, hugged her and told her “yes Dalal you are” with a tender smile drown on her face. “But I am not blonde like Cinderella or white skinned like snow white” said the girl with shaking lips. Her mom looked straight at her eyes and said “beauty is what your eyes believe it is. The eyes tell the truth that your heart feel” “I don’t understand mom” said Dalal. “It means that you’re beautiful to me because my eyes know the truth of your heart and I love you.it doesn’t matter if you were black or white, tall or short, because no matter what… I will always love you, you are my very beautiful daughter” Dalal smiled and went to play with her doll, she knew she looked nothing like that beautiful doll but she also knew that her mother loved her more than anything in the whole wide world and that was more than enough in that moment, because it was all what she wanted. * From my book *Dalal* a short flash back from her childhood |
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i really liked the speech because it was a real story, sorry for your mom by the way :16: i think there are some grammatical mistakes, but not that much, i want to asses the writing not the grammar. The essay was very nice, but it lacks the professional touch, it seems like you wrote it when you were in high school !! right if this is the best you can do then i think you should work more on your self before you start writing professionally :27: |
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wow, as i said before, there are some grammatical mistakes but im only assessing your writing i really liked this one, you were writing from the heart just like a professional writer and you reached to the audience with your pasionate words and relativly short clear sentences :21::21::21::21::21: |
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[]i really liked the speech because it was a real story, sorry for your mom by the way
Thank you, She's fine now thanks to god :16: i think there are some grammatical mistakes, but not that much, i want to asses the writing not the grammar. Yes i realize that but as i said I've wrote it 3 years ago :) The essay was very nice, but it lacks the professional touch, it seems like you wrote it when you were in high school !! right Yes i was in high school if this is the best you can do then i think you should work more on your self before you start writing professionally sure Insha'Allah but I wish you've read the rest too thanks for stepping by <3 :27: |
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]wow, as i said before, there are some grammatical mistakes but im only assessing your writing
i really liked this one, you were writing from the heart just like a professional writer and you reached to the audience with your pasionate words and relativly short clear sentences :21::21::21::21::21: Well I do what i can but I am not perfect :$ that was the most honest opinion i got so far Thank you <3 |
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Really Great
I'm waiting the whole book but now I will read all what you wrote I read the first part thank you dalal you are such a good writer |
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:27:this piece of writing is so good, it could be a good bed time story for kids, if you can keep writing with the same style, i believe you can make fairy tales for kids and obviously you are so good at this :43:im honest, don't be upset with me |
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I'm waiting the whole book but now I will read all what you wrote I read the first part thank you dalal you are such a good writer[ Thank you, I don't think I will post so many of it but I'll do my best to share <3 |
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[]:27:this piece of writing is so good, it could be a good bed time story for kids, if you can keep writing with the same style, i believe you can make fairy tales for kids and obviously you are so good at this :43:im honest, don't be upset with me I am not upset at all you just didn't get the point it was just a hint that this child had some thoughts about herself which will help as the story goes on in makeing the thought of the girl who is trying to realize her inside and outside grows up in a very complicated way 'cause she used to think ....diffrently idk ..did you get it ? :24: |
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yes yes, i understand what you mean..... the begging sounds like a fairy tale to me, but if you think you can develop the story to describe Dalals in her adolescence and mature age,then i think the story could grow into something great :21::21::21::21: |
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Insha'Allah I will <3 ~ :16:Thank you |
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:27:you are very welcome, and i hope that you will continue writing and maybe publish a book someday
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I whish I could show it to someone like a teacher or doctor i can't publish it here for sure and I am not sure that i should keep writing it any way thank you very much <3 and step by as much as you can read everything and comment if you liked to do so :17: |
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i guess you should, you can send your writings to your English instructor, or maybe show it to a native speaker and ask him for an honest opinion , i really wish you would keep writing, because you seem to love it and you are really good don't quit please, i will help you with anything i hate to see people with big goals unsupported :16::16: |
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I would've done that but I don't have an English instructor and that's why I'm confused but I'll do my best on saturday Insha'Allah to find someone professional I have someone on my mind might be able to help :) I won't Insha'Allah I won't stop <3 as soon as something happens I will let you all know Thank you again unlucky you may bring me some luck with this support :13::16: |
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great, never give up on your dreams
:21:if you cant find someone, let me know, i could take it to some native friends i know hope to hear good news soon |
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The rain was falling down on the first day in winter. The sound of the rain drops was getting lower and lower just in the time when the sun started to rise. Dalal opened her hazel wide eyes on her first morning as an eighteen years old girl. It was her birthday. :16: |
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Oh sure Insha'Allah it will work out, I will go for it and work harder <3 I'll let you know :) |
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I try to stay strong but I’m not really good at it … but I try and that’s what matters. :16:~ |
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we are here to support you, i know how girls can be deprived from many things in this country but at least they should get some support to achieve their noble goals
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you've almost brought me some tears :40: .................................................. ................... Time will fix it all, Love your life … You have to do so Dalal. Please go after your amazing happily end. You will live to change the world for the better, you will work very hard and you will be brave. You will be brave enough to do it all. ~:16: |
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these are the hits that drag you down when you're climbing up some people may not understand |
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I think I've post too many for today so that's will be all for now <3:16: |
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My first stopover: Yesterday was a very special day in my life, it started so boring and mean as usual, I have that math exam that I have to study for, but I really don’t feel like studying before I start saying this I should mention that it’s my last year in high school and because of that fact I have to work really hard. So, I like I was saying I didn’t feel like studying at all, so I as usual I was sitting on my bed with my laptop and chatting with friend checking my “Facebook, twitter, ask.fm, form spring, Gmail, Hotmail “ And all of these websites, because of the fact that I care about the people I love and I don’t want to let them down and ignore them ,so I kept chatting and laughing ‘till it’s 8:00 p:m I thought I should go and study ‘cause I’m not used to be careless about my education ,so I studied a few pages and then felt so bored again ,I want to spend time with the people I love and I care about ,but is it worth it to put my dreams away for it ?! , I don’t think so, I got passion I got dreams, where is that dream that I’ve fight for my whole life me being a doctor ,being a doctor will satisfy my ego ,because I know I will never feel good about myself ‘till proof myself for my inner mind for my family ,friends ,haters ,and the world to show them that I’m special exactly in the way I’ve always believed I am ,for this dream for this ambition I’ll fight as long as I’m breathing, every breath I take will push me towards ,yesterday I found my first stopover in life when I’ve read these words “don't I deserve such an honor ,I want to walk the path of excellence , the journey towards glory is full of challenges” ,and in that moment I realize I have to fight more ‘cause I know I deserve it ,I’m sure of it . The day of my math exam: In that day I woke up 3:oo a:m to study more ‘cause I wasn’t satisfied about what I did , I went to the school very tired but fighting to pay attention ,the sixth class was the time of my exam I’m happy to say that I’ve finished in 15 minute and did great ,I get back home and done some of my home works that I need to do it online and then started to write this ,I feel very proud of myself ,for some reason I believe my story will end up great and beautiful ,now I’ll go and study my other math exam ,and I know I’ll do just fine -inshallah- . (One year ago) |
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Hate that I’m that week: Really ,I need to stop myself ,waking up every day feeling worthless feeling unwanted and acting like it’s nothing but it still get to me ,I know I’m special in some kind of way ,but it seems to me that my life keeps running but I’m standing on the same place ? ,what am I supposed to do when the best part of me feels hopeless ,I know all I need is love ,and that’s what I’m trying’ to give to myself every day ,that’s what I should take care of for now, because if I didn’t do this I won’t be able to take care of anyone else . (5 months ago) |
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I feels so bad I've realized I have an amazing writings for me but they are all on paper. I've printed them and They are not on my hard disk anymore :( |
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nice, but the above piece of writing sounds like your diary , you're describing what you have been through the day before the exam and on the exam day , just like if you were talking to a friends and telling them about your feelings at that time you could gather all your writings that have the same style in one book and name it "Dalal Diary" , it would be lovely :16::16::16::16: |
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:7:I was touched by this you are really writing from the heart and from experience , but if you want this to be published you should pick fancy words and have perfect grammar, which is not a big issue at this point. "you have the writing skills, trust me, just try to use perfect grammar and "strong fancy story words :16::16:thanks |
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^^^ Actullay I am not going to puplish this, I was just writing to let it go out of my chest and I put it to show you my style That's all and I'm glad you liked it too :16: |
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i guess that's why i liked it, because it was from the heart, you weren't feeling good and you picked your pen and wrote something really nice.. best writings are usually come from such situations :27:keep it coming |
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(Decision): The word it’s all about. Today I will tell you my story with it; I’ve always wanted to leave my foot prints on the sand of time, So you’ll know there’s something that I left behind. When I leave this world I’ll leave with no regrets, I’ll be something to remember so you won’t forget, that I was here, that I did ,I’ve done everything that I wanted I’ll leave my mark in this world. All of these wishes are nothing without making a decision ,this is how I’ll make a difference , I’ll do everything that I want ,I’ll make it more than I thought it will be ,sometimes I feel lazy ,bored, feels like I don’t want to do anything ,I cried , I screamed in other times . But I keep on remembering these words Which were told by a dear friend: (Don’t I deserve such an honor? I want to walk the path of excellence) And I keep on replying I deserve it, I can do it, and I will do it –inshallah- Keep your faith in Allah, have the courage to take the most important decision which is believing in yourself. Finally my last wish is: that one day I’ll let you know that I gave my all ,did my best ,brought someone to happiness I’ll leave this world little better just because I was here And in your own way I hope you will do it May god bless you all for listening. :16:(Maybe 7 months ago I loved saying these words) |
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Shame on me: My heart beat is going faster and faster, I’ve died everyday waiting for a thousand years in a few minutes, this is how I feel when I think about my (I wonder what was this writing about. I didn't finish it for some reason and I can feel my pain but I don't know it for sure) :24::18: |
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Brilliant , i loved this one.writing like a dreamer:21::21::21: :11:looking forward to your next work |
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To my teachers: This words is for those who inspire us today, who always lend a helping hand to help show us the way, this words is for those who see their students through the tough times in their lives for that, we say thank you You have made a difference, you have shaped our minds You have changed the world, one child at a time You have always been there in everything you do I hope that you're as proud of me as I am proud of you This words is for those who heard the silent cries, Who stepped in to wipe the tears from the children's eyes, for those who gave us a safe place to grow a place that we can call our home. As I look back on my life, into the path within my reach I hope I can change a life of those that I teach I can make a difference all I do is try, Try to see a different world, through our eyes Thank you The English club leader: Dalal Khalid Under the supervision of: Miss.sadyah al-ghamdi. (that wasn't completly honest but i wrote to the teacher on "the freedom writers movie" ) :5::16: |
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really nice and its so smart that you found something to inspire you ,a movie, something to give a small push so you can grab your pen and express your feelings on papers :27:proud of you |
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In a several points in my life, I didn't realize how blessed person I am looking back I wonder, why do we have to lose things, and then a appreciate it -Dalal Khalid. |
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It was hard to hold back all of that pain, Hearing it many times how beautiful I am But it didn't matter Beauty makes no one happy, those heart I've loved weregone for so long. In every morning when I lay down every night shocking with mytears, Who said I am not lonely only because there's many people around me. Whatdoes it mean when you lose the meaning of life? You are almost ashamed ofyourself. You don't understand how did you let things get this far! But youcan't change it now, It's too late, you better keep screaming in silence don'ttalk you are not worthy for anyone's worry. :16: |
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She was crying so hard, She was lost all what she ever wanted was love and attention She deserved them but ... she didn't get them. She never got them. She's not sure what to do, She's pushing everybody away They are using her, She is just giving but never getting She can't deal with the pain, her mind is fading away Her Heart was shatterd with neglecting arrow No one will care that she can't breath no one will notice that she doesn't eat No one will see the pain and the tears 'Cause all what they see is a fake smile forming what she want to be ... (Happy). |
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feelings ... nice writing :21::21::21: ? why all your writings are kinda sad and dramatic ?:42:are you ok |
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Yeah, Sure .. I am okay Thank you |
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What is the feeling taking over? Thinking no one could open this door! I used to stand so long I used to be strong, unbreakable … Like nothing could go wrong, and Dreaming of what could be And If I’d end up happy. Trying hard to reach out to you, But it felt like no one could hear me every time I tried to speak out. But I’ll learn how to fly, I’ll do what it takes to breakaway, I will make a change and I will be brave. I will walk through those opened doors, those buildings with a thousand floors, Maybe I don’t know where or when but I got to keep moving on so I could fly away ~ :16: |
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No not really, I just wrote that actullay It depends on my mood most of the time but I write about everything you can Imagin :16: |
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good, i would like to see a totally different themes of writing:27:
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It’s time to surrender Because The Pieces Don't Fit Anymore, while you hide all the bruises and the pain caused by her love I would give it all to you, But if you left me now You will lose your last open door Oh please understand I still don’t know why ...’Cause I can’t explain why I would give it all to you Just leave me now... No use in trying to make these pieces fit anymore *SleepyWriting* |
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Short and thoughtful
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Take me away to December on my birthday, There's got to be something there for me ... I keep on telling myself, There’s a Man out there ... There's a world out there and it's waiting for me And I can hear it calling my name. Take me away from here to those beautiful days, Sing me one last lullaby ~ :16: Good Night ~ |
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Marvelous , this kinda writing that many people enjoy reading :44:the break up moment:44: LOL Thanks |
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“You know some things, you are stunning in applying some of them, but you have weakness points that you don’t realize, because you only do use your strength points and when you get to the realization of your all, you will commune with the truth of your imperfection.” You are welcome to correct any mistakes any time <3 |
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^^^ Part of "Dalal" ~ :P :$ |
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^^^ ?was this part of the text to be honest , the text is really confusing . you are using pronouns like you are talking about things we all know !! for example ?"you are stunning in applying some of them" ?what does "them" refer to ? and what are the things LOL sounds mysterious, but only the person ,whom you wrote to, can understand it Thanks for posting:16: :27:waiting for the next one |
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Yes it refers to things LOL How about posting a whole chapter that will satisfy you :P Yes it's true you can't understand it like this but i was asking about the grammer and spelling LOL doesn't matter I didn't fix everything I am still working on finishing the first draft with all of it flows :$ <3 I am proud of it <3 |
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dont get the wrong idea Dalal,the text seems good, but I wanted to point out that it was difficult to understand, thats all :2::2: and I'm proud of you, you gonna be a good writer someday :here are some tips "but you have weakness points" in English they usually just say you have weaknesses, and same situation for "strength points " :16: keep writing |
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I understand and I agree but i didn't know how to write it in any other way, you may suggest and correct it for me any ideas ?:34: |
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"asked her when she is supposed to start working. " ááÂä ãæ ÚÇÑÝÉ ÇÕíÛåÇ ÇÈí ÇÞæá ÓÃáÊåÇ ãÊì ÇáãÝÑæÖ ÊÈÏà ÚãáåÇ æãÇØáÚ ãä ãÎí Ôí íãßä Ðí ÇáãÍÇæáÉ ÇáÂáÝ ÈÚÏ Çáãáíæä áÕíÇÛÉ ÇáÌãáÉ :( :/ |
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But,here are some alternatives :you could say I asked when she was supposed to get to work I asked what time she gets to work Good luck:16: |
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After that minute she was never the same again, she would never understood that. So she started to go through a certain ritual with her feelings. She cries to release all the confusion, anger, pain and disappointment she received throughout her life. Confusion of why her Father kept ignoring her opinions about his decisions ‘till the last minute. Disappointment of her weakness and her small failures. Anger because he is dead and she has no idea how or why... And pain because she has always felt a nagging sense of pain from a young age; almost as if a part of her was missing. :16: |
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Amazing Dalal it should be understand not understood, in the first sentence wish you good luck female Shakespeare :16::16: |
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Fixed. Thank you again :5::16: |
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After writing 3000 word , almost 10 pages I decided to stop writing for awhile, try to relax and find the mood I first start writing with it With passion <3 So I guess the subject is closed for now :) |
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