المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة U.B.O (المشاركة 12014999) Hi You need to work more on your grammer and vocabulary, I hope that you get better in the future Thanks alot ان شاء الله يكون هالسمستر افضل و افضل و يرتفع المعدل اكثر و أكثر و كل ما كثرت مواد التخصص انا ارتاح نفسياً و اقدم مستوى افضل. أتمنى التوفيق للجميع

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة someone,, (المشاركة 12020212) Thank you for mention it .:d5:... please tell me what were my mistakes, if may I ask ,,,,,,, :(107)::icon19::icon19:

You are welcome

Well your mistakes are not that big it is just simply a grammar issue, but I will tell you to learn,,

First In your post above there are some mistakes such as (mention it, you should say mentioning it) Second this is you should say (If I may ask) this is regarding your

Hi
how are you all ,I hope everything is ok with you ...
I am (sooo) ( try to use correct words to benefit more) excited (tbh) (try to use full words with no short cuts to avoid forgeting the vocabulary) and I wish you a good luck all of you and me (I think it is better to say, I wish good luck to you all and me)
thanks for this good page (Or you can use "post" instead of page as it is a forum post) we (all are) gonna get benefit all of us (going to) (No need to put get) (you shall change it to "from it")

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة U.B.O (المشاركة 12020468) You are welcome Well your mistakes are not that big it is just simply a grammar issue, but I will tell you to learn,, First In your post above there are some mistakes such as (mention it, you should say mentioning it) Second this is you should say (If I may ask) this is regarding your Hi how are you all ,I hope everything is ok with you ... I am (sooo) ( try to use correct words to benefit more) excited (tbh) (try to use full words with no short cuts to avoid forgeting the vocabulary) and I wish you a good luck all of you and me (I think it is better to say, I wish good luck to you all and me) thanks for this good page (Or you can use "post" instead of page as it is a forum post) we (all are) gonna get benefit all of us (going to) (No need to put get) (you shall change it to "from it") OR Thanks for this post that will benefit us all This is my opinion, and if I made any mistake, please correct me , because I am still learning like you all :) thanks